I notice little details most overlook.
Creaks in floors, sounds of shoes being tied, remembering people by what they do when no one is looking. Interior moments.
I fear being a detail…overlooked.
I notice little details most overlook.
Creaks in floors, sounds of shoes being tied, remembering people by what they do when no one is looking. Interior moments.
I fear being a detail…overlooked.
.i am, therefore, i think. 
Awesome work!
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Thank you for reading 🙂
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Truth.
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I think that we mined similar ground this weekend. I wrote about a life without purpose, of being inconsequential. You did a great job describing being irrelevant. Very well done. Glad your linked up is weekend. 🙂
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Yeah, it’s a thought that rattles in my brainpan from time to time and I think this challenge was a perfect outlet for it. Thanks for welcoming me!
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Fear of being ignored, and his attention to detail can surely never be replicated, so he will always feel ignored.
Great post!
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Right, that is a big part of the idea being put across. Thank you for reading!
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indeed…
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I like this! Being an overlooked detail…what a frightening thought.
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It can be quite frightening! Thanks for reading!
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That’s understandable. No one wants to be ignored forever.
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Not at all!
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So glad you entered this to the challenge because this is a great write. Love how you expand it to a wider meaning. Thanks for linking up and please come back and vote for your top three!
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Thank you for the challenge! I will come back and vote 🙂
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I really like the last line. I think we’d all like to know we’re noticed, and will be remembered.
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Thank you!
I wanted to tie the beginning and end together and show it as an unrequited gesture.
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This is a such a great piece! the overlooked detail, the lost face, the similar one…. crushed into a big pile of the ones that can be ignored. Lovely work.
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Thanks so much for seeing this! It is indeed a situation where one can feel crushed.
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This is a great piece, you have hit on I think most people’s fear, being overlooked, not considered, is never something to aspire to.
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Thank you for reading! Most won’t admit the fact but live it in their actions of constantly seeking some sort of approval/acceptance.
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Thank you all for your likes!
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This is great! But you need to go to this link and link your post for the challenge. http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/2013/10/trifextra-week-ninety.html?m=1
Scroll to the bottom of the page and there is a button to add your link! You need to enter this for the contest. Great work!
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Thanks, Grace! I’ll enter the challenge 🙂
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